SAN FRANCISCO, CALIFORNIA

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-The bass tone sounds great.
-The basement acoustic guitar sounds great.
-The cymbal crash sounds great.
-The first verse vox are a good performance.

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-Record keeping got away from me here. I remember Eric’s last edit being the best one. I’m hoping this is the right version. If not please correct me.
-The line “like I should be more open” should be delivered with more conviction?
-Likewise, I wish “you can take back all your tarot cards to magic class and ask them” didn’t get weak on the last two words. Should I fix it?

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