SAN FRANCISCO, CALIFORNIA
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Michael Musika re-tracked vocals from Version I, aimed for a less self conscious performance by silencing the critics. He also added organ and bass to see if it would improve previous version. I think it did. I like it. He wrote new words for the bridge and recorded those too, and tidied up outro.
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The outro celeste part could stand to be tightened up a bit more. Probably I’ll need to have another go at the vocals, especially on the bridge. I’m going to turn this version over to Eric Kuhn though, and see what he comes up with. I think I’m done fooling around with this one for a while.
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