SAN FRANCISCO, CALIFORNIA

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-This Eric’s edit and amalgam of the previous two versions.
-The arrangement is tasteful, and sturdy.
-The space created from removing the previously prevailing density of ideas is a pleasant improvement.
-Lead vox are steady, if not terribly dynamic.

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-Beat as presently constituted is a little on the rigid side.
-The instrumental now may be too sparse.
-The outdo needs an arc.

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